Nor bad for a quickie, but:
You could try adding more frames between Keyframes to make it smoother, and you could try to smoothen out the characters. Those seemed a bit rushed.
okay ill do that ^^ thanks for the advice :)
Ok animation and the song was short/weird, but I still liked it.
Try making something with more variety next time...
Amazingly good in almost every way.
That was so perfect, I can't believe I found something wrong with it, but the light coming in from the window shouldn't be so constant, since hte clouds are going like crazy.
Honestly, for almost every other music video there are so many mistakes that I can't write them all, but this was by far one of the best animated music videos I have ever seen in flash. It must've taken forever.
Real animators use FPS.
You already heard the praise.
It's probably not #1 material, but definitely top ten.
Main Character reminded me of Itachi from Naruto with the lines on his face, and the whole thing felt a lot like Dune.
You should think about doing a Dune Tribute next time. You've got the feel down and that's one of the most important factors in a movie based on a book.
Literally made me LOL
It was ok...
I liked it and the animation looked pretty good, but I suggest that next time, you figure out a way to either include subtitles or no words or something...
The point is that I tried very hard to listen to the song's words, but I couldn't hear them well and that made me concentrate on what the song was saying and that took away from the text in the video.
You are really good at drawing in Flash though, so my 2 suggestions are to work on your guns, and next time, make it so that you only include pictures of things that are in the song, and don't add words to it, since they make it less funny.
.....Are you serious?
I don't actually mean that. I love firefox.
The only thing that I had against this movie is that the CDs are "click and drag" -able.
Work on that next time and resubmit.
Are you serious?
Overall: I liked the movie, but it was way too short!
Graphics: The graphics were really good, but there wasn't too much animation and that took away from it.
Style: I thought it was kind of annoying because of those bursts of static and noise.
Sound: The only sound was the static. I don't mind movies with no sound effects, but they should all AT LEAST have some background music, no matter how inconsequential or quiet.
Violence: None, other than at the very end, which sucked, no offense.
Humor: Was that supposed to be funny?
I didn't understand the story, and it was really short. Next time, you should have a solid story and a well animated video which actually accomplishes something (unlike this one).
Try, Try and Try again.
Quiero escribir eso commentario en espanol....
pero, no se espanol. Yo voy a hablar en ingles.
Graphics: I liked most of the artwork, how you used the brush to make it look like it was hand drawn, but this takes so long that you might want to try making objects that are more uniform and transformable.
Style: Me gusta la musica de hispanohablantes. I really liked this song, and the translation of the song into a story.
Sound: The song was good, but sometimes it didn't match the pictures/movie.
Violence: You're characters hung in mid-air too long. To make it seem more real, you might want to try having people sink faster.
humor: El Final me mato. It was too funny.
Seriously, I loved the blatant mix of DC and Marvel characters.....not.
Next time you try making a superheroes thing, try keeping it in one comic universe.
Also, to explain the audio, it was an OK song, but the quality wasn't that great. There was no real violence, and it wasn't a parody or anything, so it wasn't that funny. The only thing that I really liked was the style and planning that went into this.
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