Fremen's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[happy birthday joph]

Not bad

Nor bad for a quickie, but:

You could try adding more frames between Keyframes to make it smoother, and you could try to smoothen out the characters. Those seemed a bit rushed.

ry21 responds:

okay ill do that ^^ thanks for the advice :)

[that flash]

WTF?!

Next time try making it about something!!!!

Mechabloby responds:

nope.